Sunday, April 10, 2016

Damn Food. .

After doing all this research on food policy, the food system and the connection between humans and our food, I came to a halt in my paper. I had so many sources at first, so much information to squeeze from, yet i didn't have access to the internet or a computer half the time. The struggle to write this paper properly on time was real, i worked so hard to gather good information that could help shape the body of my essay,but it ended up being really weak and lacking reliable sources. This honestly was not my best work, and I feel like i let my instructor down on such an important assignment. There is no excuse, we had a fair amount of time to get it done. I should have stayed after school to use the computers or something. However, throughout this assignment i learned how to cite, how to gather information in order to formulate one idea from many others, I learned to revise in a deeper way by cutting out unnecessary information, and most importantly, I stood firmly by my argument and used the information I found to support my claims. Unfortunately, I was not pleased with my work.

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